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Front and trademark pose of one of my best models
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This picture is a fashion shoot which I believe aims to put forward a product: the "necklace".

Pros: the lighting is quite well mastered ; the focus well chosen on her right hand and her eye ; the colors are very warm, pink-orange which goes very well with the product's brown ; the processing on the skin is good (but maybe a little bit too much smooth, or she has a very perfect skin) ; the posture is well chosen because of the necklage wrapped around her like her hair.

Cons: a shocking detail here is the post-process done on the eye: it's terribly wrong as it looks like an eye cut from a magazine and glued on hers: this is a major issue as it pops out in a bad way in contrast with the soft skin around ; the fact that we see her right eye very partialy behind her fingers is distracting too (I'd advise to show it a bit more between 2 fingers or hide it all in the shadows) ; the blur on the bottom seems fake as it seems that the picture was taken in front and that her right elbow is "out of focus", but maybe I'm wrong here.
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TrappedWithinMyMind Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Her eye is so cool
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RogueWolf33 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
I really like this picture. Very well done. I really like the concept.
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G1Photography Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Professional Photographer
thank you! :)

I've actually done some pretty different stuff for this one, glad that people like it, again, many thanks! :)
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fabi2011 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
beautiful!
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G1Photography Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Professional Photographer
thaaaanks! :))
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Nov 17, 2012, 3:03:19 PM
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